2014 Term 3 Writing
We are learning to:
write a description
use an iPad or Mac laptop to publish our writing
read our writing in a clear voice in front of an audience
We can do this when we can:
use interesting words, write sentences that make sense, use describing words and edit and read our work.
You have used some good describing words. Your next step is to add more to your writing.
I like the way you story created a picture in my mind.